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Going Back to Primary Sources

I’ve spent a large chunk of my life teaching principles from E.M. Forster’s Aspects of the Novel: the differences between flat and round characters; “the king died, and then the queen died” is a story, but “the king died, then the queen died of grief” is a plot. I never had to read the book, because those lessons are part of the fabric of writing now. They were referenced by mentors, reinforced with examples, used to mark out the lines between good writing and bad. I had what I needed, so why go looking for the original? I had a copy if I needed it – often more than one – but there was other stuff to read that advanced his original points. Forster wrote his speeches in 1927, and the ideas had been hashed out (I didn’t even have Forster’s name right, half the time, referring to him as EM Forrester for much of the last decade). Academia doesn’t let you get away with repeating things you heard from a someone, sometime. They want you to go back to primary sources, which means I had to read Aspects of the Novel for the first time. The points Forster makes aren’t always the points I’ve inherited through the writing grapevine, where years of discussion have seen value judgements and arguments filtered into the source material. The best parts of the books aren’t the things I already knew, but the stuff nobody talks about which lead up to his key arguments.

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Big Thoughts

Mess is an Invitation

We rearranged our apartment two weeks ago, slotting furniture into new configurations and making more space for my partners stuff. Then, I got sick with a head cold, and my partner inherited the cold from me, so the job remains 80% done instead of getting everything tucked away and finalised. My desk, which was one of the few pieces of furniture not moving during the process, has played host to a small pile of things set aside as part of that final 20%, which I’ve largely been ignoring for the last seven days as I worked from the couch. It’s all too easy to find reasons to work from the couch, instead of addressing the problem. To work with the state of the desk as it is, and look for a quick solution. It’s not that the mess is hard to clear, but that clearing it means I may need to consider the questions that come after the space is work-ready. The advantage of a big, physical mess is the way it provides space to consider less-visible, procedural messes that get in the way of using a space effectively: I haven’t downloaded the virtual drive onto the desktop PC at the present; I’ve started using a bunch of tools on the laptop that aren’t compatible with the desktop PC; shifts in focus and daily attention that no longer sync with existing long-term goals, and projects that have been set aside without thinking about the implications. My mess isn’t a sign

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Stuff

The Sunday Circle: What Are You Working On This Week?

The Sunday Circle is the weekly check-in where I ask the creative-types who follow this blog to weigh in about their goals, inspirations, and challenges for the coming week. The logic behind it can be found here. Want to be involved? It’s easy – just answer three questions in the comments or on your own blog (with a link in the comments here, so that everyone can find them). After that, throw some thoughts around about other people’s projects, ask questions if you’re so inclined. Be supportive above all. Then show up again next Sunday when the circle updates next, letting us know how you did on your weekly project and what you’ve got coming down the pipe in the coming week (if you’d like to part of the circle, without subscribing to the rest of the blog, you can sign-up for reminders via email here). MY CHECK-IN What am I working on this week? I got hit with a nasty cold on Monday of last week and didn’t bounce back until Friday, so this week is largely a copy of last week’s goals: writing the first “race trails” sequence for Hell Track and doing some light revision on the opening to start bringing it in line with the story in my head. On the thesis front, I’ll be hashing out a partial chapter plan based on the little aside in Raymond Chandler’s The Goldfish, where he says:  The last time I had been in the Gray Lake district I had

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Sunday Circle

The Sunday Circle: What Are You Working On This Week?

The Sunday Circle is the weekly check-in where I ask the creative-types who follow this blog to weigh in about their goals, inspirations, and challenges for the coming week. The logic behind it can be found here. Want to be involved? It’s easy – just answer three questions in the comments or on your own blog (with a link in the comments here, so that everyone can find them). After that, throw some thoughts around about other people’s projects, ask questions if you’re so inclined. Be supportive above all. Then show up again next Sunday when the circle updates next, letting us know how you did on your weekly project and what you’ve got coming down the pipe in the coming week (if you’d like to part of the circle, without subscribing to the rest of the blog, you can sign-up for reminders via email here). MY CHECK-IN What am I working on this week? There’s a heavy uni week coming up where I’ve got a bunch of days at university, with a month to lock down the new shape of the thesis based on the feedback from confirmation. The next couple of weeks is going to be spent writing rough mini-essays locking down the shape of various arguments a bit better, so I can see where they’re intersecting and which aren’t quite there. On the Hell Track front, a close study of Agatha Christie’s Murder on the Orient Express dining car scene finally got me through the draft version

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News & Upcoming Events

“You Don’t Want To Be Published” is out. Here’s How to Get It For Free

So I have a new book out there in the world, a collection of essays and blog posts titled You Don’t Want To Be Published (And Other Things Nobody Tells You When You First Start Writing). It’s available for sale at all good ebook retailers as we speak, but I’m going to suggest you hold off on purchasing it for a moment. Because I don’t want you to buy this book. I want you to subscribe to my newsletter, Notes from the Brain Jar, where I’m giving the book away as a special bonus to all new subscribers. If that sounds like a deal you’re interested in, you can sign up here and you’ll get your copy of the book mailed out all neat-and-easy. If you’re not the newsletter type, you can still purchase the book. Or, if you’re so inclined, read everything for free by copy-pasting the titles into Google and finding the original blog posts or essay publications, almost all of which are available for free online if you’re willing to put the time and effort into tracking them down. WHY I’M GIVING THIS BOOK AWAY Offering a free ebook to newsletter subscribers is a pretty standard tactic these days, and I’m definitely offering this book up in order to give people who are on the fence a reason to give Notes from the Brain Jar a try. While I run hot-and-cold on social media and blogging, I’ve discovered that I really enjoy the process of putting together an

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Sunday Circle

The Sunday Circle: What Are You Working On This Week?

The Sunday Circle is the weekly check-in where I ask the creative-types who follow this blog to weigh in about their goals, inspirations, and challenges for the coming week. The logic behind it can be found here. Want to be involved? It’s easy – just answer three questions in the comments or on your own blog (with a link in the comments here, so that everyone can find them). After that, throw some thoughts around about other people’s projects, ask questions if you’re so inclined. Be supportive above all. Then show up again next Sunday when the circle updates next, letting us know how you did on your weekly project and what you’ve got coming down the pipe in the coming week (if you’d like to part of the circle, without subscribing to the rest of the blog, you can sign-up for reminders via email here). MY CHECK-IN What am I working on this week? Much of this week be translating handwritten Hell Track scenes into the main document and going in for a rewrite of some earlier scenes I’d like to get a bit more focused and clear. I’m working into the second act at this stage – heading for the second race – and it presents an interesting conundrum: if I have overplayed my hand with earlier action scenes (a strong possibility), how do I escalate matters in the later parts of the book? How do I make the scenes feel different and unique? Going back and locking

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Sunday Circle

The Sunday Circle: What Are You Working On This Week?

The Sunday Circle is the weekly check-in where I ask the creative-types who follow this blog to weigh in about their goals, inspirations, and challenges for the coming week. The logic behind it can be found here. Want to be involved? It’s easy – just answer three questions in the comments or on your own blog (with a link in the comments here, so that everyone can find them). After that, throw some thoughts around about other people’s projects, ask questions if you’re so inclined. Be supportive above all. Then show up again next Sunday when the circle updates next, letting us know how you did on your weekly project and what you’ve got coming down the pipe in the coming week (if you’d like to part of the circle, without subscribing to the rest of the blog, you can sign-up for reminders via email here). MY CHECK-IN What am I working on this week? Mostly, a holiday. I’m down in Adelaide for a quick Fringe Festival visit this weekend and I’ll be off the grid until Tuesday. This largely means I’ll be coming home and going straight into preparation for the university tutorials I’m teaching this semester and I’ve had this week blocked out as a “catch up on whatever project you want” as a result. What’s inspiring me this week? Fringe! Or, at least, I’m assuming it will. Expect a more detailed response when I return next week, but given that I’ll be attending a bunch of theatre,

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Sunday Circle

The Sunday Circle: What Are You Working On This Week?

The Sunday Circle is the weekly check-in where I ask the creative-types who follow this blog to weigh in about their goals, inspirations, and challenges for the coming week. The logic behind it can be found here. Want to be involved? It’s easy – just answer three questions in the comments or on your own blog (with a link in the comments here, so that everyone can find them). After that, throw some thoughts around about other people’s projects, ask questions if you’re so inclined. Be supportive above all. Then show up again next Sunday when the circle updates next, letting us know how you did on your weekly project and what you’ve got coming down the pipe in the coming week (if you’d like to part of the circle, without subscribing to the rest of the blog, you can sign-up for reminders via email here). MY CHECK-IN What am I working on this week? This week is all about getting You Don’t Want to Be Published released on Wednesday and getting set up for my first week of tutoring at University come Thursday, but I’ll be getting some work in on Hell Track (and, hopefully, restarting the project diary) around the edges. What’s inspiring me this week? My partner picked Dear White People as our Saturday night viewing and we ended up mainlining the entire first series in one fell swoop. It’s a show that excels at complex characters and the writing is incredibly good. What action do I

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Sunday Circle

The Sunday Circle: What Are You Working On This Week?

The Sunday Circle is the weekly check-in where I ask the creative-types who follow this blog to weigh in about their goals, inspirations, and challenges for the coming week. The logic behind it can be found here. Want to be involved? It’s easy – just answer three questions in the comments or on your own blog (with a link in the comments here, so that everyone can find them). After that, throw some thoughts around about other people’s projects, ask questions if you’re so inclined. Be supportive above all. Then show up again next Sunday when the circle updates next, letting us know how you did on your weekly project and what you’ve got coming down the pipe in the coming week (if you’d like to part of the circle, without subscribing to the rest of the blog, you can sign-up for reminders via email here). MY CHECK-IN What am I working on this week? The bulk of this week is given over to finishing the first act of Hell Track and getting started on the second act. This means I’m well behind on my six-week project sprint, but getting through my PhD confirmation saw me running at high anxiety for three straight days and I struggled to step away from that state once the confirmation was done. In the end, I declared much of last week a wash so I could focus on my mental health, with the goal of re-starting the sprint on Monday. What’s inspiring me this

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Sunday Circle

The Sunday Circle: What Are You Working On This Week?

The Sunday Circle is the weekly check-in where I ask the creative-types who follow this blog to weigh in about their goals, inspirations, and challenges for the coming week. The logic behind it can be found here. Want to be involved? It’s easy – just answer three questions in the comments or on your own blog (with a link in the comments here, so that everyone can find them). After that, throw some thoughts around about other people’s projects, ask questions if you’re so inclined. Be supportive above all. Then show up again next Sunday when the circle updates next, letting us know how you did on your weekly project and what you’ve got coming down the pipe in the coming week (if you’d like to part of the circle, without subscribing to the rest of the blog, you can sign-up for reminders via email here). MY CHECK-IN What am I working on this week? The first half of my week will be given over to finally preparing and delivering my PhD confirmation presentation and doing the associated meetings. That’s on my plate after Tuesday, which means my primarily focus shifts back to Hell Track and trying to move into the third and forth sequences. What’s inspiring me this week? If you missed Mary Robinette Kowal’s 47th Birthday post, in which she breaks down the process of drafting a story from idea to execution, I’d strongly urge you to go and check it out. There’s little things to pick up

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Works in Progress

Hell Track Project Dairy: Day Five

Week one is done and it’s been illuminating. I don’t think of myself as a big word-counts-per-day kind of writer. I know I’ve done it in the past, when jamming towards a particularly tight deadline, but it’s always come with an opportunity cost – other projects get neglected and I usually fall into a heap at the end as anxiety kicks me in the teeth. The intriguing thing about the six-week sprint is that it’s part of an eight week cycle in which I’m intentionally neglecting other projects until I hit the regrouping-and-planning phase in week seven, then intentionally taking a week off at the end in order to recover in week 8. It’s a really different mindset, and not having to sort through my pile of projects and make decisions about what gets attention at the the start of the day has been incredibly pleasant. TRANSLATION FOLLIES (OR: TODAY, IN FILM AND FICTION AREN’T THE SAME THING, DUMBASS) The first sequence of an Arena-of-Death narrative holds a pretty standard narrative task: showcase the world the protagonist exists in prior to the Arena, so we know what they are fighting for. It usually ends once the protagonist is targeted and captured, leading us into the second sequence where we encounter The Show Before The Show. It’s where they learn the realities of life in prison (the Jason Statham Death Race), get someone else embroiled in the conflict accidentally and encounter the studio flunkies (The Running Man) or see how different

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Works in Progress

Hell Track Project Diary: Day Four

Day Four of the Hell Track sprint is in the bag, and it’s been another day where working on the project doesn’t necessarily mean charging ahead with word-count. Today and tomorrow, in particular, will be slowed down the shift in focus towards the second sequence (which brings a fresh series of narrative questions to explore) and the need to set aside a few hours to work on my upcoming PHD presentation. USING PLANNING TECHNIQUES AS A PANTSER Back on Day One I shared the outline I’d put together for the book’s first sequence, which largely consisted of half-scribbled notes and scene titles dumped into a scrivener corkboard. I also noted that I’m a planner by necessity and a pantser by preference, which is my early outlines are relatively sparse and I have scenes with labels like “MAGGOT DOES SOMETHING SPECIAL,” acknowledging the story beat I need to hit at that moment to get the rhythms right and trusting the details will sort themselves out by the time I hit that scene and know more about the character and the world. The problem with these outlines is that they stop being useful incredibly quickly as scenes are written and decisions are made, because new beats suggest themselves and new world-building details need to get fleshed out. The way I tend to counter this is re-outlining as I go along, doing periodic checks where I revise the front of notecards to accurate reflect what’s happening (or what will happen after I apply

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